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[The Melancholy Of 110mb.com]

Scene 15

Location: Flying van, in the air

Police helicopter voice: Unidentified Air Craft goto the local airport now we will show you the way!
Andre: Hmmm *looks at the paperwork...* Oh crap... its not certified in this air space...
Yi Ze: what isnt? the van?
Andre: yea...
Police helicopter voice: If you keep refusing to follow our orders the air force will be coming!!!
Morton: Ba #*&$ them *sticks his finger at them while the other hand sends a nice looking grenade which has a peace symbol on it *
Police helicopter voice: UH OH...
*BOOOM the police helicopter starts loosing control and crashes into the small lake close by were they see the cops swimming and eating donuts to shore...*
Andre: MORTON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Morton: what?
Andre: LOOK AHEAD THANKS TO YOU!!!!!!!!
Morton: Opps
*30 fighter jets come flying head on to the flying van*
Auberta: Does this mean i can fly while you fight?
Andre: Erm... do you even know how to fly anything?
Auberta: well i have played GTA VC, and ace combat the full series...
Andre: Does this kid do any thing else but play games?
Auberta, Morton, Yuri: Nope
Andre: Great... does any one else know how to fly something?
Every one (but Auberta): Nope
Andre: fine... here take control...
Auberta: YEPPE
*Neva comes threw again and the first thing Auberta does is a nosedive twirl making every one but Andre Morton and Neva throw up*
All: Auberta!!!
Auberta: sorry
*Auberta starts flying the van properly...*
Auberta: OH LOOKY I FOUND A RED BUTTON
Andre: DONT TOUCH THAT!!!
*Directly disobeying the order Auberta hits the red button*
Andre: were doomed...
Morton: what was it for?
Andre: you will see...
*the wings quickly get retracted and van starts falling at a fast speed*
Every one but Auberta: AHHHHHHHHHH WERE GOING TO DIE HELP US!!!!
Auberta: WEEEEEEEEEE *fun i guess to her *
*all of a sudden a whole bunch or machine guns and various other types of weapons come out then the wings came back as fast as they disappeared... BANG every one but Auberta smacks into the floor*
Auberta: COOL, PLAY TIME
*Auberta starts shooting at the 30 jets*


Auberta is turning into a real pain in the butt

Opps i forgot to put the actions in red fixed

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Andre: oh sh!t.
wing commander bob: alright you lot, land immediately or you will die
Auberta: no f**k off BIATCH
wing commander bob: oh you asked for it
*wing commander bob presses a big red button, it fires "super nuclear atomic anthrax TNT missiles mk2" at them*
Andre: Auberta you f*****g bitch you just got us killed
Morton: i have had an idea
*Morton presses a button*
*Auberta flies out of the van*
*the missiles lock on to her*
Auberta: you f****g t**ts
*the missiles hit Auberta and she explodes*
wing commander bob: right come on lets land
Andre: o.k we'll come quietly
*they land*
*the people in the van get out*
*they steal the "hyper tank mk3" prototype and drive off at 100mph*
Andre: phew that was a close one, almost got caught
*something explodes*
Andre: Yi Ze get on the gun, shoot those b*****ds down
Yi Zi: sure
*Yi ZI mans the gun*
*she shoots down wing commander bob in his "super-mega-war plane mk4"*
that was a bit bad i'll admit, but it does get better

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Scene 16
Location: On the road, in the tank.

*They're rushing through the desert in their new tank, when...*
Yuri: Morton! WHY DID YOU DO THAT?!
Morton: Just wait...
Andre (@ the wheel, fully concentrated on driving the tank): OK, we have about 5 miles until the next town.
Yi Ze: What are we gonna do there?
Andre: It's getting late, we must find a motel or so.
Yuri: Morton! You killed an innocent child!
Morton: Well, innocent? Now that's really funny. And, if everything worked, what I think it did, I didn't even...
Auberta (appears standing on one of those missiles like on a surfboard): ...kill me? Of course you didn't, daddy.
Yuri: That's impossible! I saw you explode! It was terrible!
Auberta: That wasn't me, just my clothes. I'm kind of immune to explosions, they do significantly less harm to me as to others. This doesn't mean I were immortal though. But I've burnt my fingernails badly, my hair looks horrible, and most importantly, I'M NAKED!
*Auberta is in her underwear, with burnt pieces of her clothing hanging onto her; her fingernails look really burnt, and her hair is like she had been struck by lightning*
Auberta: Daddy, next time, buy me please some explosion-proof clothing!
Yuri: My baby!
*Hugs Auberta*
Auberta: OK OK mommy, I love you too, but please let me go! Oh, and don't call me baby again!
Yuri: What do you mean with 'go'?
Auberta: Well, I have to do homework. I have school tomorrow. I'm going home. Cya! I love you all!
*Surfs away on her missile*
All (except Morton and Yuri): What the...?!
Morton: No, I don't know how and why is she like that. But if she weren't, she would've died when she was three. She loved playing with burning, explosive, electrical or otherwise dangerous stuff.
Yuri: Yes, it was a messy time with her as a baby...
Morton: Umm... a three years old kid is not a baby anymore...
Andre: OK, we're there.

*They park the tank behind some bushes outside the town*
Morton: OK, wait here, I'm gonna look for a motel.
*Morton walks into the town and starts looking at the signs on the buildings*
Sorry, I have a habit of reviving the dead characters. You have to forgive me This time I did it so that Morton isn't such a bad guy. But I sent Auberta home, as she was starting to bug me, too.

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scene 17
location, in the town

*morton is walking along the street*
*nasli is in a dark alley*
morton: i hope i find a motel soon, its getting dark
*morton walks past naslis alley way*
*nasli jumps out and sticks a knife to mortons throat (the threaten not the slitting)
Nasli: well well well, Morton is alone on a dark night looking for a place to sleep
Morton: *scared* w w w what are you going to do to me
Nasli: well that would be telling
*nasli drags morton away, knife still in place*
hows that for a tense scene?

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Scene 18 cont'd
Location: Dark alley

*Suddenly Nasli gets kicked in his ass and falls onto Morton; Morton falls with his head on the asphalt and loses consciousness (faints)*
Yuri (M): I told you already, I'll kick his ass!
*Runs away*
Nasli (getting up and rubbing his ass): Ouch, that did hurt...
*Runs after Yuri (M); Yuri (M) gets in his car and drives away, Nasli jacks another car and follows*

Scene 19
Location: At the tank

Yuri: Hmm, where's Morton?
Neva: He must be here very soon. Don't worry.
*After 2 hours*
Yuri: I'll go looking for him!
*Yuri enters the town. It's dark (no wonder, it's 1:00 AM), so she uses a small flashlight to light her way*

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scene 20
location: the dark alley

*Yuri sees Morton lying on the floor unconscious*
*Yuri calls for an ambulance*
@ksbja, could you have left Yuri (m) out of it?, or at least have left the kidnapping alone, i was trying to build up some tension, after Morton gets kidnapped he will come back later on in the play

[iKsbjA]

Scene 20 continued
Location: The dark alley

*When Yuri is trying to pull Morton out of the alley, the car Nasli jacked stops in their way, blocking any chance of getting back to the central road*
Yuri: Uh-oh...
*Nasli gets out, holding an uzi in his hand. He points the gun at Yuri.*
Nasli: Ha-ha, looks like your friend is dead!
Yuri: No, he's just... (thinks for a moment, then starts to cry) OK, yeah, he's dead. Somebody has killed him. (cries even louder)
*Nasli holds his gun at Yuri*
Nasli: Go where I tell you to, or you will die, too! Even if that other guy escaped, you won't!
*Nasli drags Yuri inside an old, abandoned building and locks her up in a cellar, then leaves to hide the car before the police finds it; just as he leaves, the ambulance arrives, picks Morton up, and leaves*
Nurse 1 (yes the same person as before): Duh, we told that girl to stay with the injured guy!

Scene 21
Location: Bushes
Neva: I'll go looking for them.
Yoshi: I'll go with you.
*They enter the town*
@GV - OK, fixed. Morton is at some kind of hospital, the other Yuri got away from Nasli (Nasli said that 'that other guy escaped', he meant Yuri (M) with that), and Yuri is kidnapped. Tension restored

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scene 21
location bushes

*they hear gunshots*
*they run back to the tank*

scene 22
location tank

Neva: we heard gunshots
Andre: right lets get going
*they drive into town*
Nasli: sh!t they're in a tank
*Nasli bails from car*
*tank drives over the car*
*gun spins to point at Nasli*

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Scene 23
Location: Town

*Nasli ducks to avoid being shot by a rocket; Yoshi climbs half-out and points his pistol at Nasli*
Yoshi: Don't even think of running away! Tell me, what you did to my friends!
Nasli: I killed them. And now's your turn.
*Unexpectedly, Nasli pulls out his gun and fires at Yoshi; Yoshi quickly climbs back in*
Yoshi: Alright, let's make a grave for him!
*Yoshi targets the tank gun and shoots at the top of the other building (see pic and map)*

          |      |
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          |alley| Neva
          |      |
______|      |______
    Nasli

     Tank

*The right side building is where Neva is, the left one is behind Nasli. The top of the left building explodes and breaks apart, bricks fall onto Nasli, but he runs into the alley and into the building where Neva is.*
Andre: Now we've lost him!
Yi Ze: I don't think so... I have an idea.

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Yi Zi: oh no here we go again
sorry all i could think of

[The Melancholy Of 110mb.com]

Scene 23
Location: Town

Neva: common lets go!!!
Andre: were just going to leave???
Neva: for now... we need to get the gang together
Andre: ok...
*They drive to were they were staying prior too...*
Neva: OK EVERY ONE GET IN
*They all cram into the vehicle like clowns <<< LOL, and drive back*
Andre: now what?
Neva: ok wait a few minutes ok... Yi Zi are they coming?
Yi Zi: Yep.
*they wait for a few minutes till a mysterious black van comes and pulls up with what seems like a small army of tanks and armoured trucks (ok well kinda like a big one )*
Neva: WTF i though only a few of the friends are coming!!!
Yi Zi: this is only a few... why not enough?
Neva: YES!!!
*Andre looks in the back of one of the cargo trucks and said...*
Andre: there is enough weapons here to start a WAR!!!
Yi Zi:I was kinda thinking about that but when i said so they all said no...
Andre: Who are you with ?!!?
Yi Zi: Green Peace
Andre: Yea right...
*some one walks up*
Head chief of operations: are we late?
Yi Zi: Nope just in time
A few of the different types of the vehicles which showed up:

10 of these transporting some weapons...
20 of these full of people sitting and standing
10 of these showing but about 40 more around the city (these are relay trucks )
20 of these holding random stuff
10 of these holding more random stuff
More random stuff (mostly medical stuff) and about 20 of em
5 of these (they cost allot )
numerous of these too many to count (they came first)
about 20 of these full of weapons and medical stuff

HEHE have fun blowing things up you have about 300 people their not including the gang

[iKsbjA]

Scene 23 continued
Location: Town

Yi Ze (Yi Zi was actually GV's typo ): OK, now let's roll over that area!
Andre: No, wait! Maybe he has got Morton and Neva there!
Yi Ze: Right. So let's surround the area, shoot some satellite pics from the radar van, and make up a plan.
Sani: No, we have no time for makeup! We must hurry! (quiter) Women are all the same. Makeup, clothing, and men. Gah.
Yi Ze (ignoring Sani, to head chief): OK, now surround the area, and keep in touch with me over the radio!
Head chief of operations: KK ('key-'key)... I mean, yes, miss!
*Head chief commands the army to surround the area*
Yi Ze (to the gang): OK, now let's go inside that van and make some pics.
*They go inside and make some pics*
Yoshi: Satellite photos are great!
Yi Ze: Yes, indeed.
Head chief of operations, in Yi Ze's radio: OK, we're all set up.
Yi Ze: Is this area completely abandoned?
Head chief of operations, in Yi Ze's radio: It seems so.
Yi Ze: OK, so distribute the weapons, secure all exits from the area, take over all available buildings!
Head chief of operations, in Yi Ze's radio: OK.
*After 10 minutes*
Head chief of operations, in Yi Ze's radio: All done.
Yi Ze: Fine. Now, we will put on the clothing, so that you recognize us and don't try to stop us. We'll also take some for Neva and Morton. Then, we will go in. On command, perforate the area.
*What they don't know, is that Morton isn't there... he's in the hospital...*
Head chief of operations, in Yi Ze's radio: Understood. Over.
*They walk into the darkness, carrying powerful flashlights, but they're off, so that they don't draw Nasli's attention*

Scene 24
Location: Wooden building

Andre: It seems like there's a door in the floor...
Yi Ze: Looks like a cellar door.
Sani: Shall I open it?
Yi Ze: Yes, but keep quiet!
*Sani picks the lock*
Sani: Ta-dah!
Yi Ze (whispers): Cool! But now, keep quiet!
*They sneak down and see Nasli pointing his gun at Neva*
Nasli: Now you're gonna die - once and for all!
*Yi Ze sneaks behind Nasli and kicks him in the ass; then, Yoshi and Sani try to lock his hands, but Nasli punches them and a fight starts between the two and Nasli; meanwhile, Yi Ze and Andre help Neva get out, then Sani and Yoshi run away with them*
Neva: Where's Morton?
Andre: Didn't Nasli get him?
Neva: No, I left him injured in the alley when I got kidnapped. I told Nasli he's dead. I had called 911 before. I guess they took him away.
Andre: I hope so...
Yi Ze (to Head chief of operations, in the radio): After two minutes, blow the area up!
*Cool parkour/freerunning style chase scene, through the dark alleys of the abandoned town, at night; suddenly, they run into a dead end. They turn around, and see Nasli pointing his gun at them.*
Nasli: Now, you're all gonna die!
*Yi Ze pulls out the radio to cancel the request for destroying the area*
Nasli: No! Drop it NOW!
*Yi Ze drops the radio*
Nasli: I can also make some fireworks, if you want!
Sani: Yes, please!
Nasli: So, you think you're funny, huh?
Sani: No, but my friends do...
Nasli: Is this true? Do you think that guy is funny?
Andre: Well, kind of. In a good way. Unlike you...
Nasli: So you think I'm funny, too?!
Andre: Yep.
Nasli: Why the f*ck?
Andre: Hmmm...
Sani: Because you're threatening us with a gun, that isn't even loaded!
Nasli: Oh yeah?
*Nasli points at Sani and tries to fire, but all he makes is a click.*
Nasli: poop!
*Sani shows the ammo taken out from Nasli's uzi*
Sani: Better luck next time!
*Sani throws the ammo in Nasli's face; using that moment, they quickly run past Nasli and out of the abandoned area; just as they run out, everything explodes behind them*
Yi Ze: Phew...
*Police sirens sound; Yi Ze runs to the van and grabs the radio:*
Yi Ze (to Head chief of operations, in the radio): Abort mission! We're out, but the 5-0 is coming. Get away from here now ASAP! We take one of the radio vans.
Head chief of operations, in Yi Ze's radio: Understood.
Yi Ze (to gang): OK, now let's drive through the inhabited part of the town away from here.
Andre: I liked the tank. Why are we leaving it?
Yi Ze: We have no time! And it looks kind of suspicious on the road.
Andre: Oh... Okay.
*They drive through the town taking north exit, while their army takes another road*
<<< They had to take this one, although the black one was cooler...
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IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII    out  IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII
II Inhabited III         II Inhabited III 
IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII          IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII
IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII          IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII
IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII          IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII
IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII          IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII
IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII          IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII
AAAAAAAAAAA          army leaves here >>
AAAAAAAAAAA                   ,|/
AAAAAAAAAAA
A Abandoned A               .\|/, Bushes
AAAAAAAAAAA
AAA   <<alley<<                     ,|.\
AAAAAAAAAAA                  Tank
                      ^ way in
Wow, that was longer than I expected...

sorry all i could think of

No problem, short posts make sense, too. Much better than nothing!
EDIT: @The Melancholy Of 110mb.com - could you please edit your post and replace Neva with Yi Ze? It was my fault, I added Neva in the last sentence in my previous post, because I had forgotten she's still kidnapped. I changed her to Yi Ze afterwards, but you had already posted. Oh, and I'm waiting for a continuing...

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@offtopic  Is someone writing this somewhere??

It would be cool to make a kind of website about this and what all people wrote.

[iKsbjA]

Melancholy said in the first post he might make a video out of this once. And I might ask him if I can make something aswell, in The Movies.
Anyways, why didn't you add a few lines, you don't have to write so long posts as Melancholy or me do. Even a few lines is enough.

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yeah add a few lines, it will become a good idea

[iKsbjA]

...said GV and didn't write a single line to the play himself.

[general vegitable]

o.k o.k

scene 24
location in the tank
Yi Zi err andre you went the wrong way
Andre no, the army went the wrong way

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Scene 24 continued
Location: in the tank van

Yi Ze: What do you mean by that?
Andre: They will get stuck in a canyon with a dead end, and they can't return because of the cops...
Neva: Nooo!
Yi Ze: No problem. They'll settle down there, and wait for the cops to leave. They could set up a base for living up to a month (or longer, if additional food is received), so my friends are safe. The only problem is that we can't call the army for help in the closest time.
Yoshi: Luckily the van has the cool computer which can connect to the satellite. What else can you do with it?
Yi Ze: Much! Play CS, GTA, NFS...
Sani: What about a LAN party? We could play over satellite against the army's best players...
Andre: Can you both maybe think of something else than games? Like how to find Morton, for example?
Yi Ze: Wait, Sani brought me to an idea...
*Yi Ze connects the computer to the army's database and messes around it for a while*
Yi Ze: OK, I got it. Morton is in the St. Martini Hospital, 42 miles away from here. If Nasli finds that out, he could just go there and kill him, and it would look like a deadly doctors' mistake...
Andre: Let's be there first then!
*Andre performs a 180° turn with the van*
Yi Ze: Why did you do that?! We were going the correct direction!
Andre: Oh, sorry...
*Andre drives in the wrong direction until the van reaches 90mph and then performs another 180°; then, it speeds away*

[The Melancholy Of 110mb.com]

@offtopic  Is someone writing this somewhere??

It would be cool to make a kind of website about this and what all people wrote.

making a web site and letting any one write anything can get a little messy

Melancholy said in the first post he might make a video out of this once. And I might ask him if I can make something aswell, in The Movies.
Anyways, why didn't you add a few lines, you don't have to write so long posts as Melancholy or me do. Even a few lines is enough.

hmm yea sure you can chances are you would have more time then me for the next while so i dont see why not

as for posting in the play play i will do that latter on im in class i should be able to do it when i get back home in about 6 hours ...

[iKsbjA]

11:21 PM here. Good night guys.